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【Planar Adventures 】游荡剑客变体
« 于: 2018-12-27, 周四 14:16:59 »
爱塔剑客 Azatariel
Source Planar Adventures pg.10

爱塔剑客是极乐原野的卫士,致力于在位面间挥洒他们古灵精怪的奇思妙想和任性的善意。即便是面对最凶残的魔鬼,他们也是无拘无束的乐天派。爱塔剑客的名字来源于对爱塔天族的模仿。在战斗中爱塔剑客在敌人之间欢快的穿梭,无惧危险。善于混战的爱塔剑客可以让敌人互相攻击,而超自然的好运可以保护她们免受可怕的痛楚,当盟友因恐惧而颤抖,又或者是受到了黑魔法的影响时,爱塔剑客将以一个慈怜的仪态治愈他们的疾病并带领他们前进。

阵营:爱塔剑客必须是混乱善良。如果她改变了阵营,那么她将失去通过这个变体所获得的所有能力,直到她恢复混乱善良阵营为止。

炫技:爱塔剑客获得如下炫技。

巴拉尼之迅捷 (Bralani’s Swiftness,Ex) :在3级时,只要爱塔剑客有至少一点时髦值,她就能忽略困难地形带来的移动力惩罚。

这取代了游荡剑客的威胁剑舞炫技。

祸水东引 (Whimsical Riposte,Ex):在3级的时候,爱塔剑客在使用轻型或单手穿刺武器使用适时格挡反击炫技(opportune parry and riposte deed)时(包括在反击的时候),她可以将魅力调整加值加到攻击和伤害骰上。此外,每当爱塔剑客成功的格挡了一次对手的攻击,作为反击的代替,她可以以一个直觉动作,将这次攻击重新导向致另外一个目标,这个新的目标必须在攻击者的触及范围内,并且攻击者使用其原本的攻击掷骰来决定是否命中。

这取代了游荡剑客的精准刺击炫技。

翼蛇之误导 (Lillend’s Misdirection,Ex):在7级的时候,当一个对手夹击爱塔剑客并在攻击检定中失手时,爱塔剑客可以以一个直觉动作花费两点时髦值对攻击者使用一个移位战技。如果她的移位战技成功,她与攻击者交换位置,而参与夹击却未做出攻击的另一个敌人将会代替爱塔剑客,成为这次失手攻击的目标。使用相同的攻击掷骰作为结果(包括夹击的加值)。

这取代了精确瞄准炫技(targeted strike deed.)。

迦勒天冲锋 (Ghaele’s Assault,Ex):在11级的时候,爱塔剑客可以在冲锋时花费两点时髦值,若她如此做,则冲锋所带来的AC减值变成-4,而她可以再冲锋结束的时候做出一次全回合攻击。

这取代了伤口出血炫技(bleeding wound deed)。

乐土信念 (Elysian Conviction ,Su):在2级的时候,爱塔剑客如果有至少一点时髦值,她可以将她的魅力调整加值加到对抗影响心灵效果的豁免掷骰上。(好像不吃动作和豆了唉)

这取代了快乐人生(charmed life)。

战舞 (Battle Dance,Ex):在3级和之后每4级,爱塔剑客的基础移动速度增加10尺,这是一个增强加值。爱塔剑客在穿着中甲或重甲,又或者是中载或重载时,失去额外移动速度加成。

这取代了机敏(nimble)。

乐土之爱 (Affection of Elysium,Su):爱塔剑客的情感能够减轻痛楚,在4级和之后每4级,爱塔剑客可以以自己的游荡剑客等级作为圣武士等级,来选择一个这个等级的圣武士可选择的恩惠。以一个标准动作,爱塔剑客可以向一个自愿的,相邻的生物施以关爱,并将恩惠效果应用到目标身上,将她的游荡剑客等级视为圣武士等级。爱塔剑客可以使用这个能力的次数为1/2游荡剑客等级+魅力调整。

这取代了游荡剑客的奖励专长。

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Azatariel
Source Planar Adventures pg. 10
Azatariels are the champions of Elysium, dedicated to spreading its unpredictable whimsy and capricious goodness across the planes. Irrepressible and happy-golucky even in the face of the most tyrannical devil, azatariels take their name from the azatas that they emulate. In battle, azatariels exult in darting among their foes, heedless of danger. Mastery of combat’s chaos allows azatariels to turn enemies’ strikes against each other, while supernatural good fortune protects them from dire afflictions. When allies falter with fear or suffer the effects of dark magic, a compassionate gesture from an azatariel cures their ills and spurs them onward.

Alignment: An azatariel must be chaotic good. If an azatariel changes alignment, she loses all abilities granted by this archetype until her alignment returns to chaotic good.

Deeds: An azatariel gains the following deeds.

Bralani’s Swiftness (Ex): At 3rd level, while the azatariel has at least 1 point of panache, she ignores movement penalties from difficult terrain.

This replaces the menacing swordplay deed.

Whimsical Riposte (Ex): At 3rd level, the azatariel adds her Charisma modifier to attack and damage rolls made with light or one-handed piercing weapons as part of her opportune parry and riposte deed (including when riposting). In addition, whenever the azatariel successfully parries an opponent’s attack, instead of riposting she can redirect that attack to another target as an immediate action. The new target must be within the attacker’s reach, and the attacker uses the original attack roll to determine the attack’s success.

This replaces the precise strike deed.

Lillend’s Misdirection (Ex): At 7th level, when a foe flanking the azatariel misses her with a melee attack, the azatariel can spend 2 panache points as an immediate action to attempt a reposition combat maneuver check against the attacking foe. If she succeeds at the combat maneuver check, she and the attacking foe switch positions, and the melee attack roll that missed the azatariel instead targets the flanking opponent that did not make the attack, using the same attack roll result (including the bonus gained from flanking).

This replaces the targeted strike deed.

Ghaele’s Assault (Ex): At 11th level, the azatariel can spend 2 panache points when charging. If she does, the AC penalty for charging changes to –4 and she can make a full attack at the end of her charge.

This replaces the bleeding wound deed.

Elysian Conviction (Su): At 2nd level, while she has at least 1 panache point, an azatariel adds her Charisma bonus to her saving throws against mind-affecting effects.

This replaces charmed life.

Battle Dance (Ex): At 3rd level and every 4 levels thereafter, an azatariel’s base speed increases by 10 feet. This is an enhancement bonus. An azatariel in medium or heavy armor or carrying a medium or heavy load loses this extra speed.

This replaces nimble.

Affection of Elysium (Su): An azatariel’s affection relieves harmful afflictions. At 4th level and every 4 levels thereafter, an azatariel selects a mercy from those available to a paladin whose class level is equal to her swashbuckler level. She can show her affection to a willing, adjacent creature as a standard action to apply the effects of these mercies to the targeted creature, treating her swashbuckler level as her paladin level. An azatariel can use this ability a number of times per day equal to half her swashbuckler level plus her Charisma modifier.

This replaces the swashbuckler’s bonus feats.
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Re: Planar Adventures 游荡剑客变体
« 回帖 #1 于: 2018-12-27, 周四 14:21:19 »
爱塔剑魂这个名字是瞎取的,毕竟我是取名废人,欢迎大佬提供更好的译名和捉虫

“你看这是爱塔里面的勇士,我们发挥一下,叫艾达王吧”
                                                                      ——支离破碎的思考发言

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Re: Planar Adventures 游荡剑客变体
« 回帖 #2 于: 2018-12-27, 周四 15:57:34 »
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Re: Planar Adventures 游荡剑客变体
« 回帖 #3 于: 2018-12-27, 周四 17:00:20 »
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爱塔荡客?
中土有碑刻,籍籍大无名。
暂称文书,读之至我宫。

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Re: 【Planar Adventures 】游荡剑客变体
« 回帖 #4 于: 2018-12-27, 周四 19:33:07 »
 :em021哇我看到了什么,魅力上攻击和伤害!

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Re: 【Planar Adventures 】游荡剑客变体
« 回帖 #5 于: 2018-12-27, 周四 19:34:38 »
Azatariels are the champions of Elysium

Azatariels是极乐园野(Elysium)的卫士。

azatariels take their name from the azatas that they emulate.

azatariels的名字来源于对爱塔天族的模仿(因为是模仿)azata+riel+s,riel音译为瑞尔,或者其他啥的都很蠢

建议叫爱塔剑客,剑魂给人继承的错觉,但实际上他只是模仿而已,就像卫宫士郎和言峰四郎的关系(我在说什么鬼)

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Re: 【Planar Adventures 】游荡剑客变体
« 回帖 #6 于: 2018-12-27, 周四 20:51:33 »
:em021哇我看到了什么,魅力上攻击和伤害!
五倍魅力上AC!
強烈譴責向施法怪物套幼年模版的流氓行為!
我永远喜欢神术四环施法者!

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Re: 【Planar Adventures 】游荡剑客变体
« 回帖 #7 于: 2018-12-27, 周四 22:44:21 »
Azatariels are the champions of Elysium

Azatariels是极乐园野(Elysium)的卫士。

azatariels take their name from the azatas that they emulate.

azatariels的名字来源于对爱塔天族的模仿(因为是模仿)azata+riel+s,riel音译为瑞尔,或者其他啥的都很蠢

建议叫爱塔剑客,剑魂给人继承的错觉,但实际上他只是模仿而已,就像卫宫士郎和言峰四郎的关系(我在说什么鬼)
哦感谢抓虫~ 极乐园野我查了译名表,然后还是想翻译成极乐净土,最后缩减成乐土了,剑魂只是我想上点B格而已

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Re: 【Planar Adventures 】游荡剑客变体
« 回帖 #8 于: 2018-12-27, 周四 22:55:23 »
抓个虫,园野是错别字吧_(:_」∠)_
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Re: 【Planar Adventures 】游荡剑客变体
« 回帖 #9 于: 2018-12-28, 周五 00:12:31 »
抓个虫,园野是错别字吧_(:_」∠)_
正常来说应该是原野,谷歌搜的果园前辈的翻译用的是园野(´゚ω゚`)