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风见幽华:
  首先我要说,3R的翻译错误实在是太……让人防不胜防了。
  唉,好吧,废话少说,先把跑团写卡过程中抓到的虫堆在这里,当作做卡时的备忘。然并卵你已经火星了  劇透 -  一些译名:   competence bonus(加值类型):表现加值/能力加值
  luck bonus(加值类型):幸运加值/运气加值
  circumstance bonus(加值类型):环境加值/境况加值(万律译名),可同名叠加
  resistance bonus(加值类型):抗力加值/反抗加值(万律译名)
  swift action(动作类型):迅捷动作/快速动作(九剑翻译中出现过)
  standard action(动作类型):标准动作/单动作(XPH翻译中出现过)
  free action(动作类型):自由动作/即时动作(XPH翻译中出现过)
  immediate action(动作类型):直觉动作/立即动作(万律译名)
  变形术(PHB/法术):目标应为“接触到的自愿活物”。原文:wiiling living creature touched。

  庇护之翼(龙之族裔/法术):龙血亚种的生物或龙类每3施法者等级能额外庇护一个盟友,而非每等级一个。原文:Special: A dragonblooded character, or a character with the dragon type, can provide cover for one additional adjacent ally for every three caster levels.

  太阳门派(完美战力/战术专长):“破晓之光”战术选项并不能令敌人措手不及。原文:Flash of Sunset: To use this maneuver, you must move adjacent to a foe instantaneously, as with a dimension door spell or the monk’s abundant step class feature. If you do so, you can immediately make a single attack at your highest attack bonus against that foe.

  徽民(天命族裔/种族):光之符文不提供属性加值,而是“属性检定与基于该属性的技能检定”以加值。原文:Aesh (“vigor”): +1 bonus on Strength checks and Strength-based skill checks.其它属性符文暂略。

  吉斯护身符(万物/物品):提供的加值(而且是洞察加值)只在对抗异怪的攻击和能力时有用。When you activate a githborn talisman, you gain a +2 insight bonus on attack rolls and weapondamage rolls against aberrations, as well as a +2 insight bonus on Will saves made against the extraordinary, supernatural,and spell-like abilities of aberrations.

  战斗腰带(万物/物品):+2先攻表现/能力(competence)加值。3发充能将给予一个整轮动作/全回合动作(1 full-round action),而不是一整轮。While worn, it grants you a +2 competence bonus on initiative checks. This is a continuous effect and requires no activation.(中略)3 charges: 1 full-round action.

  龙魂环带(万物/物品):完整翻译如下。劇透 -   :   价格(物品等级):2000GP(6级)
  位置:腰部
  施法者等级:6级
  灵光:中等(DC18)塑能系
  激活/重量:-/-

  这条宽阔的镶边腰带上描绘着一只正在深呼吸的龙的图案。
  当你穿戴着龙魂环带时,你的喷吐武器增加一个伤害骰(或1点伤害,如果你的喷吐武器不以伤害骰数来计算的话)。如果你还拿着一把伤害类型与你的喷吐武器相同的魔法武器,那么你的喷吐武器豁免DC+1(译者吐槽:有点难以理解啊……还非得拿个炽焰剑才能让你喷的火DC增加什么的……)。

  先决条件:喷吐武器,制造奇物。
  花费:1000GP,80XP,2天。  妖精法术传闻(PHB2/专长):原文专长名为“Elven Spell Lore”,先决条件为Int 17 or elf, Knowledge (arcana) 12 ranks.此处的“妖精”应为“精灵”,该专长也应译作“精灵法术学识”。仅仅只看原译文的话,容易将此处的“妖精(Elven/Elf)”误解为“精类(Fey)”,故在此提出。

  鲜血领主手套(万物/物品):懒得给原翻译挑刺,干脆重译。劇透 -  重译,附原文:   价格(物品等级):5120GP(10级)
  位置:手部
  施法者等级:20
  灵光:强烈(DC25),死灵系
  激活:-
  重量:2磅

  这些沉重的带刺铁手套用重重叠叠的金属板制成,从它的结合处慢慢滴出鲜血,在这双手套的表面上覆盖了一层厚厚的红色血浆。
  传说,每双血手套都被一千名受难者的血浸泡过,并且有着漫长而可怕的历史。在守序邪恶、中立邪恶或守序中立的穿戴者手中时,它如同一副+1带刺铁手套一般作用。

  遗宝之力(Relic Power):如果你建立了适当的神圣连接(proper divine connection),在你穿戴着它进行近战接触攻击检定时,鲜血领主手套将给予你+2幸运加值。

  为了使用它的遗宝之力,你必须信仰海克斯托并且要么牺牲一个4环神术位(sacrifice a 4th-level divine spell slot),要么拥有真实信徒专长并至少达到7HD。

  如果你牺牲了一个6级神术法术(sacrifice a 6th-level divine spell)或者有真实信徒专长并且达到至少11HD,那么你施展的全部3级或更低的近战接触法术自动强效化,如同搭配了法术强效专长(不需要占用高级法术位,也不需要延长施法时间)。

  传说:第一双鲜血领主手套诞生于一个无情地屠杀了整村人,来为鲜血领主军队开路的海克斯托牧师(宗教知识DC15)。在这个牧师死后,海克斯托收回了这双铁手套。从那之后,每个世纪至少一次,海克斯托都会将铁手套给予一个他中意的追随者(宗教知识DC20)。

  先决条件:制造魔法武器和盔甲,法术极效,Sanctify Relic,造成重伤。
  花费:2250gp(外加一双精制铁手套所需的620gp),180xp,5天。劇透 -  原文:   GAUNTLETS OF THE BLOOD-LORD [RELIC]
  Price (Item Level): 5,120 gp (10th)
  Body Slot: Hands
  Caster Level: 20th
  Aura: Strong; (DC 25) necromancy
  Activation: —
  Weight: 2 lb.

  These heavy spiked gauntlets are made from overlapping metal plates. Blood drips slowly from the junctures, coating the surface of the gauntlets with a thick, red ooze.
  Said to harbor the blood of a thousand victims, each pair of these gauntlets has a long and grisly history. They function as +1 spiked gauntlets if you are lawful evil, lawful neutral, or neutral evil.

  Relic Power: If you have established the proper divine connection, gauntlets of the blood-lord grant you a +2 luck bonus on melee touch attacks while you wear them.
 To use the relic power, you must worship Hextor and either sacrifice a 4th-level divine spell slot or have the True Believer feat and at least 7 HD. If you sacrifice a 6th-level divine spell or have the True Believer feat and at least 11 Hit Dice, every 3rd-level or lower melee touch spell that you cast is automatically empowered as by the Empower Spell feat (although such a spell doesn’t use a higher-level spell slot and the casting time of the spell isn’t increased).

  Lore: The first pair of these gauntlets was worn by a priest of Hextor who mercilessly slew entire villages to make way for the Blood-Lord’s approaching army (Knowledge [religion] DC 15). Upon the priest’s death, Hextor reclaimed the gauntlets. Since then, he has given a pair to a favored follower at least once every century (Knowledge [religion] DC 20).

 Prerequisites: Craft Magic Arms and Armor, Maximize Spell, Sanctify Relic,inflict serious wounds.
Cost to Create: 2,250 gp (plus 620 gp for pair of masterwork spiked gauntlets), 180 XP, 5 days.
  魔杖袭(完美奥术/专长):听猹说有人吹这个专长能花750块钱造成50d6点伤害……妈的有这好事贼就不用那么苦逼了,包里装满0级法术魔杖什么的……劇透 -  重译并附原文:   魔杖袭
  你能以近战接触攻击来引导魔杖中的魔法能量。
  先决条件:使用魔法装置4级
  效果:以一个标准动作,你能以魔杖进行一次近战接触攻击检定,消耗1发能量对一个生物造成1d6点伤害。任何来源的额外伤害都无法加到此次伤害上(包括宿敌favored enemy、偷袭sneak attack、破X斩加值smite bonuses)。但作为攻击的一部分,你能够启动魔杖,如果魔杖内的法术是一个射线或目标法术,那么被攻击的生物同样也会成为法术的目标(射线法术将自动命中)。如果法术效果是一个区域或创造一个扩散效果(creates a spread),你可以指定该生物占据的任意方格交叉点为法术源点(但这么做可能会让法术影响到你自己)。不产生范围效果的法术(例如各种召唤怪物法术)不能应用于魔杖袭。劇透 -  原文: WANDSTRIKE
You can channel the magical energy of a wand through your melee attacks.
Prerequisite: Use Magic Device 4 ranks.
Benefit: As a standard action, you can make a melee touch attack with a wand, expending one charge to deal 1d6 points of damage to the creature struck. You apply no extra damage to this attack regardless of its source (including sneak attack, favored enemy, and smite bonuses), but you can activate the wand as part of the attack. If the spell cast from the wand is a ray or a targeted spell, the creature struck is the spell’s target (with ray spells hitting automatically). If the spell affects an area or creates a spread, you can designate the spell’s point of origin at any grid intersection point of the creature’s space (but doing so might put you in the affected area). Spells with an effect that does not cover an area (such as the various summon monster spells) cannot be used with a wandstrike attack.
  尾扫术(龙之族裔/法术):这个法术是允许法抗的,并且一个龙血亚种或龙类施法者施展时+1CL而不是每次都击退(Special: A dragonblooded character, or a character with the dragon type, casts this spell at +1 caster level),最后,它是10尺半径爆发(10-foot-radius burst)而不是10尺直径。

听海落潮声:
法术
睡眠术的施法时间应为1轮
劇透 -   : Sleep
Enchantment (Compulsion) [Mind-Affecting]
Level: Brd 1, Sor/Wiz 1
Components: V, S, M
Casting Time: 1 round
Range: Medium (100 ft. + 10 ft./level)
Area: One or more living creatures
within a 10-ft.-radius burst
Duration: 1 min./level
Saving Throw: Will negates
Spell Resistance: Yes
人类变巨术的施法时间应为1轮。
劇透 -   : Enlarge PersonTransmutation
Level: Sor/Wiz 1, Strength 1
Components: V, S, M
Casting Time: 1 round
Range: Close (25 ft. + 5 ft./2 levels)
Target: One humanoid creature
Duration: 1 min./level (D)
Saving Throw: Fortitude negates
Spell Resistance: Yes
辉耀护甲持续时间应为小时级。
劇透 -   : Luminous Armor
Abjuration
Level: Sanctified 2
Components: Sacrifice
Casting Time: 1 standard action
Range:Touch
Target: One good creature touched
Duration: 1 hour/level (D)
Saving Throw: None
Spell Resistance:Yes (harmless)
欢欣满载(Elation)(好人书):受法术影响的生物在所有取决于力量与敏捷的检定都能得到+2士气加值
应为力量与敏捷属性得到+2士气加值
劇透 -   : Elation
Enchantment [Mind-Affecting]
Level: Bard 2, cleric 2, emissary of
Barachiel 2, Joy 2, sorcerer/wizard 3
Components: V, S
Casting Time: 1 standard action
Range: 80 ft.
Targets: Allies in an 80-ft.-radius spread
of you
Duration: 1 round/level
Saving Throw: Will negates (harmless)
Spell Resistance: Yes (harmless)
Your allies become elated, full of energy
and joy. Affected creatures gain a +2
morale bonus to effective Strength and
Dexterity, and their speed increases by
+5 feet.
Elation does not remove the condition
of fatigue, but it does offset most of the
penalties for being fatigued.
物品
FIERY TUNIC
炽热之袍
效果:穿戴者获得火焰抗性5。
每天一次,启动后穿戴者获得火焰护盾(Fire Shield,仅限温暖护盾的效果)的效果,持续5轮。与此同时,任何你持有的近战武器被视为炽焰武器(DMG 224)。你可以在任何时候以迅捷动作关闭此能力。
劇透 -   : FIERY TUNIC
Price (Item Level): 5,000 gp (9th)
Body Slot: Torso
Caster Level: 7th
Aura: Moderate; (DC 18) conjuration
Activation: — and swift (command)
Weight: 2 lb.
This eye-catching tunic shifts and moves like liquid fl ame. A crystal shard burns a brilliant red in the middle of the chest, fused seamlessly with the cloth of the shirt.A fiery tunic grants you resistance to fire 5.This is a continuous effect and requires no activation.When you activate the tunic, it generates a fire shield, as the spell (warm shield effect only), that lasts for 5 rounds. Inaddition, any melee weapons you hold hile the fire shield is active are treatedas fl aming weapons (DMG 224). You can deactivate this effect at any time with
职业

MASTER SPECIALIST
学派大师(CM P.71)
职业技能不包含使用魔法装置
劇透 -   : Class Skills (2 + Int modifier per level): Concentration, Craft, Decipher Script, Knowledge (all skills, taken individually),Profession, Spellcraft.

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法术
水墙术(Sand)
效果存疑

冻寒之环 / 寒冕术(Corona Of Cold)(万法大全)
该法术触发伤害的时间是在你的回合开始时。
劇透 -   : Starting in the round you cast the spell, corona of cold also deals 1d12 points of cold damage each round at the beginning of your turn to all other creatures within the area.
物品
幽灵裹尸布(LM)价格应为35,000GP
劇透 -   : Strong necromancy; CL 12th; Craft Magic Arms and Armor,
Knowledge (religion) 5 ranks, create undead; Price 35,000 gp;
Weight —
念珠项链(DMG/SRD)
价格存疑,待有空去确认……

怪物
夸赛魔(MM)每一只只能变成以下列表中的一种或两种:蝙蝠,小型或中型变种蜈蚣,蟾蜍和狼。
劇透 -   : Alternate Form (Su): A quasit can assume another
form at will as a standard action. Each quasit can
assume one or two forms from the following list: bat,
Small or Medium monstrous centipede, toad, and wolf.
火巨灵(MM)
并没有那个改变外形(Su),在类法术能力中增加每日一次:变形术(只能对自己使用)
劇透 -   : Spell-Like Abilities: At will—detect magic, produce flame,
pyrotechnics (DC 14), scorching ray (1 ray only); 3/day—invisibility,
wall of fire (DC 16); 1/day—grant up to three wishes (to nongenies
only), gaseous form, permanent image (DC 18), polymorph (self only).
Caster level 12th. The save DCs are Charisma-based.

界门领域(SC)
神授能力翻译有误。应为:
神授能力:你可以侦测一个传送门(无论是否被激活),如同其为一个普通的密门一样。(搜索DC20)
劇透 -   : Granted Power: You can detect an active or inactive portal as if it were a normal secret door (Search DC 20).劇透 -   : 原翻译:神授能力:可以通过DC20的检定侦测一道普通的密门是否传送门(无论是否被激活)。

空気:
才能融合
应为技能只能获得等同于cl的等级,且最高+10
劇透 -   : 才能融合(Combined Talent)(完美巫师)
预言系
等级:吟游诗人1
法术成分:语言,姿势
施放时间:一个标准动作
距离:近距(25英尺+5英尺/2等级)
目标:相距30尺内的2个自愿生物
持续时间:10分钟(可解消)或直到消散
豁免检定:意志(无害)
法术抗力:可(无害)
一瞬间,你的两名伙伴眼睛睁大好像他们彼此之间有着联结一般。
你让一名受术者可以使用另一名受术者的技能等级,代替她自己的,再加上等同于你施法者等级的技能等级(最多+10)。你必须在施法时决定哪一个技能受到这个效果,并且该法术会持续10分钟直到使用了一次该技能。法术的收益者使用另外一名受术者的技能等级,但是使用自己的能力,种族和其他调整值。第二名受术者无法使用该技能,直到法术效果结束。

You allow one of the subjects to make use
of the skill ranks of the other subject, in
place of her own, up to a value equal to
your caster level (maximum 10 ranks).
You must decide which skill is affected
when you cast the spell, and the spell
lasts for long enough to attempt a single
use of that skill, up to a maximum of
10 minutes. The beneficiary of the spell
uses the other subject's skill ranks in
place of her own but applies her own
ability, racial, and other modifiers. The
second subject does not lose access to
his skill ranks while under the effect
of this spell.沙暴术
法术/术士法术列表中无此法术。

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