【3R】翻译报错集中处

[kataaaka]

海藻之绞（Kelpstrand），本来一个好用的德鲁伊法术被翻译毁了
你用感知调整和施法者等级取代力量调整和体型加值，所以最后擒抱检定上是BAB+CL+感知
目标被擒抱且缠绕
你不需要任何动作来维持擒抱

劇透 -   :

Kelpstrand
(Spell Compendium, p. 128)

Conjuration (Creation)
Level: Druid 2,
Components: V, S, M,
Casting Time: 1 standard action
Range: Close (25 ft. + 5 ft./2 levels)
Target: One creature/3 levels, no two of which are more than 30 ft. apart
Duration: 1 round/level
Saving Throw: None
Spell Resistance: No

You stretch out your hand and long strands of wet kelp streak out to envelop your foes.

Make a ranged touch attack at each target. If you hit a creature, you immediately make an opposed grapple check against the creature as a free action without provoking attacks of opportunity. You add your caster level and your Wisdom bonus to the result of your grapple check rather than your Strength bonus and size bonus. If you succeed, the target becomes entangled in the thick strands of kelp and is grappled. Each round, the target can attempt to escape the kelpstrand by making a successful grapple or Escape Artist check against the kelpstrand's grapple check. You are not considered grappling yourself while using this spell. Once you shoot your strands of kelp, you need not take any action to maintain the effect.

A creature targeted with multiple kelpstrands has to make separate grapple or Escape Artist checks against each kelpstrand currently grappling it to escape. If you cast this spell while you are within 300 feet of the ocean shore, you gain a +4 bonus on any grapple checks made to determine the outcome of a kelpstrand grapple.

Material Component: A piece of dried seaweed.

[坑团术士人间桑]

FC2的进阶，地狱神偷的进阶条件并没有BAB+5

[白菜团子]

猛禽箭，其遗宝先决条件应该为“必须信仰艾罗娜且牺牲一个4环神术法术位或拥有入信者专长”，而不是“4级神术施法者”
To use the relic power, you must worship Ehlonna and either sacrifice a 4th-level divin

[玻璃心沙包]

CAr
即时超魔专长：这些超魔专长无需法术位调整，因此他们同样可用于类法术能力与邪术（不过由于类法术能力没有言语或是姿势成分，“即时默发”法术无法使用，而“即时瞬发”仅能用于邪术）。

劇透 -   :

Sudden Metamagic Feats: These metamagic feats don’t require modifi ed spell slots, and so they work as well with spell-like abilities or invocations as they do with spells (though because spell-like abilities don’t have verbal or somatic components, Sudden Silent Spell doesn’t apply and Sudden Still Spell applies only to invocations).

正确翻译应为：
即时超魔专长：这些超魔专长无需法术位调整，因此他们同样可用于类法术能力与邪术（不过由于类法术能力没有言语或是姿势成分，“即时默发”法术无法使用，而“即时定发”仅能用于邪术）。

法术持久
有固定范围的针对自身的法术的持续时间可以增加到24小时。

劇透 -   :

Spells with a fi xed or personal range can have their duration increased to 24 hours.

正确的翻译：
有固定范围的法术或针对自身的法术的持续时间可以增加到24小时。

[千面相]

万物

TUNIC OF STEADY SPELLCASTING
稳定施法长袍
价格（物品等级）：2500gp（7级）
装备部位：躯干
施法者等级：3级
灵光：昏暗（DC16）变化系
启动：——
重量：1磅
这件土色的长袍十分结实，尽管其材料就像丝绸一样柔软。在领子、腰间和褶缝处，金线编织着代表稳固的符文。
你在专注检定上获得5点能力加值。与其名不同，长袍给予你的加值可以应用于所有的专注检定，并不仅仅用于施法。
制造需求：制造奇物，熊之耐力
制造花费：1250gp，100xp，3天

错译为标准动作（指令），虽然大部分人根据逻辑就能判断出加值是常驻的

劇透 -   :

TUNIC OF STEADY
SPELLCASTING
Price (Item Level): 2,500 gp (7th)
Body Slot: Torso
Caster Level: 3rd
Aura: Faint; (DC 16) transmutation
Activation: —
Weight: 1 lb.
This earth-colored tunic is sturdy, though the material is as soft as silk. Around the neckwrists, and hem are runes of stability stitched in gold thread.
You gain a +5 competence bonus on Concentration checks. Despite the name, the tunic’s bonus applies on all Concentrtion checks, not just those made to cast
spells.
Prerequisites: Craft Wondrous Item, bear’s endurance.
Cost to Create: 1,250 gp, 100 XP, 3 days.

[kataaaka]

Spell Compendium

神圣变化（Holy Transformation）（万法大全）
变化系[善良]
等级：牧师 7
这个法术与次级神圣变化基本相同。在你施展后，你的外表，特性，能力将会与獒首神使（怪物手册16页）相似。在法术作用下，你的生物种类变成异界（亚空，善 良，秩序），你的身型变成中等，同时拥有5尺/5尺的占据/触及，如同獒首神使一样。你的力量与体质得到+2的神圣加值。你获得60尺黑暗视觉。豁免检定 得到+4神圣加值。你得到5/邪恶的DR。距离你10尺以内的邪恶生物将在攻击和豁免检定上受到-2的惩罚。你能够使用与理解天界语。

 
次级神圣变化（Holy Transformation, Lesser）（万法大全）
变化系[善良]
等级：牧师 4
成分：V，S，DF
施法时间：标准动作
射程：自己
目标：自己
持续时间：1轮/等级（可解消）
一股神圣的力量流过你的身体，使你身边闪现金色的光环。随后你的身体与力量发生变化，你能感受到你身上开始散发神性

你施展这个法术后，你的外表，特性，能力将会与守护者（Miniatures Handbook 66页）相似。在法术作用下，你的生物种类变成异界（善良），你的身型变成中等，同时拥有5尺/5尺的占据/触及，如同守护者一样。你的力量与体质得 到+2的神圣加值。你获得60尺良好飞行与60尺黑暗视觉。豁免检定得到+4神圣加值。你得到5/邪恶的DR。距离你10尺以内的邪恶生物将在攻击和豁免 检定上受到-2的惩罚。你能够使用与理解天界语。

HOLY
TRANSFORMATION
Transmutation [Good]
Level: Cleric 7
This spell functions like lesser holy transformation, but when you cast this spell, you assume the physical appearance and many of the qualities and abilities of a hound archon (MM 16). While under the effect of the spell, your creature type changes to outsider (archon,good, lawful), and your size changes to Medium. You have the space and reach of a hound archon (5 feet/5 feet). You gain a +4 sacred bonus to Strength and Constitution. You gain darkvision out to 60 feet. You gain a +4 sacred bonus on saving throws. You gain damage reduction 5/evil. Evil creatures within 10 feet of you take a –2 penalty on attack rolls and saving throws. You gain the ability to speak and understand Celestial.
HOLY
TRANSFORMATION,
LESSER
Transmutation [Good]
Level: Cleric 4
Components: V, S, DF
Casting Time: 1 standard
action
Range: Personal
Target: You
Duration: 1 round/level (D)
A charge of holy energy courses through you, causing a barely visible golden aura to surround you. You feel a closeness to your deity as well as a noticeable increase in physical girth and power. When you cast this spell, you assume the physical appearance and many of the qualities and abilities of a protectar (Miniatures Handbook 66). While under the effect of the spell, your creature type changes to outsider (good), and your size changes to Medium. You have the space and reach of a protectar (5feet/5 feet). You gain a +2 sacred bonus to Strength and Constitution. You gain a fly speed of 60 feet (good). You gain darkvision out to 60 feet. You gain a +2 sacred bonus on saving throws. You gain the ability to speak and understand Celestial.

法术次级神圣变化（Holy Transformation, Lesser）只提供+2豁免的神圣加值，且不提供DR5/邪恶和距离你10尺以内的邪恶生物将在攻击和豁免 检定上受到-2的惩罚的效果。
法术神圣变化（Holy Transformation, Lesser）提供的力量和体质神圣加值是+4而不是+2。

[超小舞]

看到了于是就回几个关于武术的吧：
虔心　守势非难（Defensive rebuke）：架势技-你攻击的敌人必须攻击你，否则引发借机攻击。
原文为 强化技，而不是架势
天诛打击（Crusader’s　Strike）：打击技-成功的攻击使你治疗1d6+1/武道家等级点伤害。

天诛打击（crusader's strike）

虔心派（攻击技）

等级：天诛之剑1级

发动时间：标准动作

距离：近战攻击

目标：一个生物


“当你攻击时，神圣的能量环绕在你武器周围。当你的武器找到目标时，这种能量洗涤着你，为你治疗伤势并给你继续作战的力量”


作为武技的一部分，你必须对一个阵营与你相差至少一阶的对手造成一次成功的近战攻击。这个对手必须在某方面对你或你的盟友产生直接而明显的威胁。如果你的攻击命中，你和你10尺内的盟友得到1D6点以及每武道家等级再+1点的生命值医疗。（最多为5）

原文为 你或你的盟友。

后面的活力打击一样，是你或你的盟友。

[云销雨霁]

好像楼上有人说了，摸了

[白菜团子]

塑沙者7级能力
“沙漠沉眠（Ex）：7级或者更高的时候，如果你埋在西部的土地里（一般来讲是沙子、尘土、碎石），你可以恢复失去的器官，修好损坏的骨头，就如同你受到了一个复原术。土壤必须足够厚并且将除了你脸以外的部分都埋起来。你每天可以使用这个能力一次。”
其中的复原术应该为再生术

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Desert Slumber (Ex): At 7th level and higher, if you lie in the soil of the waste (generally desert sand, dust, or gravel), you regrow severed body members, mend broken bones, and restore ruined organs as though a regenerate spell had been cast upon you. The soil must be at least deep enough, and occupy a large enough area, to cover all but your face. You can use this ability once per day.

[云销雨霁]

魔宠口袋 Familiar Pocket（1环法术）勘误，原文来自《万法》
（1）原文：
   When you cast this spell, a garment or container becomes a safe haven for a Tiny or smaller familiar. The spell turns the target pocket into a comfortable extradimensional space (about 1 cubic foot). The familiar can fit inside the space without creating any noticeable bulge in the item. Whenever the familiar is touching you, you can whisk it inside the space as a free action by speaking a command word chosen by you when the spell is cast. If the familiar can speak, it can command itself inside. As a free action, you can call the familiar forth or it can leave the space on its own.
   Once inside, the familiar has total cover and total concealment, and as a free action, you or the familiar can further seal the space to make it airtight and waterproof. The air supply inside the sealed space lasts for 1 hour, but with the pocket unsealed, the familiar can remain inside indefinitely. The familiar cannot attack or cast spells from within the space, but can use supernatural or spell-like abilities as normal (provided they don’t require line of sight, which the pocket blocks). You continue to gain the special ability granted by your familiar. While inside the pocket, the familiar continues to benefit from the share spells ability as if it were adjacent to you.
   The spell ends if the familiar pocket is placed within or taken into another extradimensional space (such as a portable hole). If your familiar is within the pocket when the spell duration expires or if the spell ends abnormally (as above), the familiar appears in your space unharmed.
（2）我的翻译
  当你施放这个法术时，一件衣服或一个容器就成了一个 超小型或更小的魔宠的 安全区。这道法术能将目标器物或口袋转化成一个舒适的异次元空间（大约1立方英尺）。魔宠可以放在空间内，而不会(使容器)产生明显的凸起。当魔宠可以触碰到你时，你可以 以一个自由动作(free action) 念出 施展法术时所选的特定命令语 将其(魔宠)迅速移入空间中。如果魔宠能说话，它可以说出命令自己躲进去。作为一个自由动作，你可以把魔宠叫出来 或 魔宠自己主动离开这个空间。
  进入内部后，该魔宠获得 完全掩蔽(total cover)和完全隐蔽(total concealment)，作为自由动作，你 或 魔宠 可以进一步的密封该空间，使得该空间不透水不透气。密封空间内的空气供应持续1小时，但是在口袋未密封的情况下，魔宠可以无限期地停留在内部。魔宠不能在空间内攻击或施法，但可以正常使用超自然或类法术能力（前提是这些能力不需要视觉线，因为口袋会挡住视觉线）。你继续获得魔宠所赋予你的特殊能力。在口袋里，魔宠可以正常的从 法术共享(share spells)能力中受益，就像它与您相邻一样。
  若魔宠次元袋被放入另一重异次元空间中（例如“携带式次元洞”），法术就会结束。当法术持续时间期满，又或是法术非常规结束（原因如上），若你的魔宠依然呆在口袋中，它将会毫发无伤地出现。
（3）超小型或比超小更小的魔宠，前面没注意